Here are some examples:
- Is it clear whose story it is? Is it clear in every scene/chapter?
- Does the introduction introduce the story from the right point of view?
- Is it clear how characters feel about each other? (play with it: someone who turns out to be an antagonistic character later can be a friend at first and vice versa)
- The theme: are different of opposing points of view represented in order to explore the subject in depth?
- How does theme manifest in each scene/chapter?
- What are the dominant emotions during the different stages of the story? Is there enough contrast and variation?
- Is there enough variation in mood or setting?
- Is there any repetition in scenes or events?
- Will the story suffer if I leave this scene or event out?
- Is this an appropriate prop to use in this scene? Could it be something more original?
- What if I start the scene with another character or a different image?
- What is the atmosphere during this even? How can I create variations within the scene?
- How does the main character feel about this place, person, object?
- How can I make it more uncomfortable for my main character?
Good luck!
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